Kon beter.
hijs wel mooi, maar idd, ik ben t met je eens dat ie nog niet af is...
dikke knuf

Daemmy

How I wish I could state this to you personally. Ugh :|. In any case, you are truly a beautiful person, sweetie--you've possessed both inner and outer beauties. I mean it, seriously. Oh heck, I'm not even kidding. coughsbeautifulcoughs

As for the poem, I thought that it could be expanded with more coherent details. It seems to be a mere portion of an even greater poem. I, nevertheless, adored this thoughtful, little piece. Nice work, hun. :) I hope you all the best and take care! Love, Debbie

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Great dear. I had a strange feeling in it and I enjoyed it. Its a mixture of feelings with little fun in it.;-)

It's cool you just gotta add more. I like it now because it's kinda funny lol. Great job. 5/5
-vino

I like it very much !