Comments : A Dream World

  • 17 years ago

    by mike magyar

    Very nice im sorry u have to feel this way but great poetry and powerful emotion

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie smiles

    This is so good! Your writing is so deep-i really like how u you used nature in your work-like the ocean and stars. It shows that you're thinking like a poet on more than one level. AMAZING!!