This was a beautiful poem bryan... You know your way with words in love poems...
As impressive as always nice work =)

Oh thats so beautiful. Lots of feeling like Lis said, its wonderful. Pure love....perfect!

Wow a trully great sonnett, thanks for the comment 5/5 for sure

Bryan
Beautiful piece. Imagery is great. You do have a way with these poetry forms.

Tis moonlight that dances upon her face,
sends chills up my back, i stare in her eyes,
they enchant my heart in this horrid place,
lost in this moment, my heart slowly cries.

Loved these lines. Very heartfelt.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Hey great poem and thanks for the comment:)

keenan

Heyy I liked the sonnet. I should try one!! Hehe...Like almost everyone who commented above me, I think you use beautiful words in the poem! The word usage was super! =) Take care,
Ash