Comments : Looking In The Mirror

  • 17 years ago

    by ScaredToSeeMe

    In the glossy reflective glass
    all she sees is a stranger.

    it says everything I couldn't say
    good job
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I really don't think any of us really like who we see in the mirror 100% sometimes the reflection doesn't really reflect who we really are. Excellent job great flow 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Isabelle

    I really liked this one also. I liked the line,

    She looks one last time into the shattered mirror
    as the breath leaves her body and her soul is set free.

    I thought it was very beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I can relate to that one. Beautiful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I can relate to that one. Beautiful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    The flow was awsome, the wording, excellent, and the all over story line I could call it was very good. I love the way you can write without rhymes. Very beautiful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Ok, ok.
    I liked it.
    I'm not much of a fan of nonrhyming, but you made it work.
    It started cliche, but didn't end up that way.
    Nicely done.
    And.
    You gave me an idea for a poem.
    So.
    Kudos to you! =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5