'unsee-able'
should '-' be in there?
I'm not sure. If not, take it out. :]
If so, amazing job!

I loved the poem.
Wording was quite good, though the flow was off here and there.
I'm sure you could care less, but wth. Imma tell you anywho.

Amazing Job.
Keep up the great work, hunni.
<3Teria.