What to do....

by Loved In Hell   Jun 5, 2007


What am i to do
when there is nothing left to live for
except tomorrows sorrow and dissapointment
dreams were formed to be broken
my childish nightmares with the present emotions
return not only in my sleep
what am i to do
when every breath is a challenge
and there is no peace in my heart
what am i to do
when all of me has dissapeared
to realize every word was just another lie
what i wouldn't do to take away everything i ever felt
with you....
what am i to do
when the only thing i truly believed in and loved
wasn't even real
what am i to do...........

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  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I like the flow and the feeling it gives. I really enjoyed my read, keep it up, kel.

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Sadly another one that I completely understand and relate to =p Been there, done that =p I loved the flow in this one also and the wording was fantastic just like the others ^_^ Another well deserved 5 ^_^
    Rhea

  • 17 years ago

    by Skye x0x0x

    Wow you wanna no something this poem it could be turned into a song.. i love singing.. but im no singer.. like everyone says my vioce is fab but i just dont think it is for me if you wanted you could make is a song.. in someway.. like find someone to sing it for you if you dont like singing coz i recon it would get pretty far

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww... Heartbreaking write. Your emotions in it are just so strong. And all you write comes from heart. Liked the ending.
    Keep writing!
    5/5

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