Aww... Heartbreaking write. Your emotions in it are just so strong. And all you write comes from heart. Liked the ending.
Keep writing!
5/5

Wow you wanna no something this poem it could be turned into a song.. i love singing.. but im no singer.. like everyone says my vioce is fab but i just dont think it is for me if you wanted you could make is a song.. in someway.. like find someone to sing it for you if you dont like singing coz i recon it would get pretty far

Sadly another one that I completely understand and relate to =p Been there, done that =p I loved the flow in this one also and the wording was fantastic just like the others ^_^ Another well deserved 5 ^_^
Rhea

I like the flow and the feeling it gives. I really enjoyed my read, keep it up, kel.