by Mihaela Jun 5, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You'll love me less |
by Farukh
This is something naughty I have ever read....you are actually trying to portray the childish feelings of the woman for her man 5/5 |
by Melly
Sad, but good job. |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
Really good poem.I believe you could have made it longer and even better but still it was short but very good.5/5 |
by Nix
Interesting poem, it is very short but still powerfully written. I don't like rhyming. 5/5 |
by Sara
I really liked this whole poem, from the rhyming to the title... great jobb, and great flow... 5/5 from me, and thank you so much for the commentt |