What you deserve.......

by Mihaela   Jun 5, 2007


You'll love me less
I must to confess
I'm scared of loneliness
The same faithless..
Your soul is my enemy
Also gives me energy
And power to keep on
What you destroyed before
I don't wanna hear any excuse
Now I'm so confused
It's your turn to receive a refuse.....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Farukh

    This is something naughty I have ever read....you are actually trying to portray the childish feelings of the woman for her man 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melly

    Sad, but good job.

  • Really good poem.I believe you could have made it longer and even better but still it was short but very good.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Interesting poem, it is very short but still powerfully written. I don't like rhyming. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    I really liked this whole poem, from the rhyming to the title... great jobb, and great flow... 5/5 from me, and thank you so much for the commentt