Confusing Thoughts of Loneliness

by isabel   Jun 5, 2007


Maybe the one I'm falling for isn't ready to catch me
Maybe I closed my eyes too long, for being afraid to see
There is too much in my life that no one can understand
Life means more to me than just sleeping in the sand

Maybe if you kissed me, this darkness would disappear
But you don't care if i live or die, or do you, my dear?
Did you ever look into the mirror and felt like breaking it in two?
To match your own broken soul, like there was nothing left to do

I always dream about you, I wish to be hold in your arms
In your heart, I can only see weakness and broken charms
You should face your own problems, before you say you can't face mine
I'm sick of looking into your eyes and telling you that I am fine

Confusing thoughts of loneliness are absorbing my twisted mind
I am hopelessly begging that you don't remain unkind
Your beautiful green eyes took my sad ability to lie
No matter what you say, this love I shall never deny

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  • 17 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Wow this was so sad & touching. Excellent, I loved it. You really captured the emotions.
    It's definantly going in my favorites =] I read some of your other poems, you're a great writer. Keep up the good work hun!!

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    Wow and excellent poem well done
    xx this is a great love poem
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    Even though I'm not really a fan of love poems- I can relate(somewhat) to what you are saying.
    (red eyes) *cough cough*
    um well, I thought it was pretty good!
    ansd what are you talking about, the flow and rythm is fine!
    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    I really enjoyed this poem. it had some sort of hold on me. the flow was nice up until the end but other than that, it was great. i love this one. great job. great way at capturing this emotion.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. i enjoyed this poem thoroughly. the wording was captivating enough for me to read only the first two lines and say to myself that i wanted to finish it. i kept it in my faves just to book mark it, but it turns out that im keeping it there.

    =]

    5/5!

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