Why do this

by fatal bliss is the best way to die   Jun 5, 2007


Why take the pills
why take the only friend to my arm
why put my friends and family through hell
why do these thoughts go through my head everyday
why tonight take my final slice
why is it to late for me
you ask me why my answer is its my release from the world

this is based on my feelings all of its true so plz and comment ~melissaraye~

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  • 17 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Girl!!!
    I know how ya feel.... I think you can express yourself very well!
    5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Im kinda a fan of rhyming poetry mostly but i like this one. its something you rrly went through and i kno how it feels. nicely done <333

  • 17 years ago

    by NoReasonToLive

    I have these same feelings... but you kno u can get through them.. im trying soo hard to get through mine right now.. i was put in a hospital for like ever it seemed like.. jst cuz i was cutting.. i love the feeling when i cut cuz it feels like my heart just stops the pain and suffering... but oh well i guess it wont happen til i die...

    this is really good... Keep it up..
    [*]Breann[*]

  • 17 years ago

    by deathdealer

    Whoa full of emotion

    nice =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Broken Saint

    I'm sure a lot of teens know how you feel..
    I'm one of them..
    I'll go write about my own exploits.. I'll let you know when I post it..

    5/5 btw.. (n_n)

    keep at it!! all of it (n_n)

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