The cool kid

by bleeding limegrenn   Jun 6, 2007


The cool kids talking at the back of the room
about there weekend plans

it's what i used to be
it's what i turned away from

laughing and teasing with no care
but for me there only comes despair

oh how i loath
for only if i were cool

i would have friends
to bad I'm a fool

for this blond head strong yet shallow
he is me and i am him

i turned him into the cool
i made him now

he is what discourages me
so shallow with a heart even shallower

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  • 17 years ago

    by PaperHearts

    Hey kyle its harley
    ill reather not the "cool" to many problems with friends and such
    and u have friends and that makes u cool
    be yourself cuz ppl dont like fakes

  • 17 years ago

    by I walked into my nightmares

    It describes u so much gj

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    The flow was a little off. I liked the format you used. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Georgi

    This is great! this is my favourite so far! again the problems and thought patterns u address in your writing are so common in every day life with school and friendship and worries about fitting in and stuff!
    I like your writing, really i do, my only suggestion is that widening your vocab may be efffective in addressing the problems u like to address. It would provide a sort of...contrast between the simplicity of your topics but the complexity of how you describe it, which could be cool =]
    Geo

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Once again don't worry about not having friends and people who aren't like you, your unique and different and thats what matters. You'll find more friends in the long run that are much better to have around. Great job 5/5

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