Watch The Sky

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Jun 6, 2007


With shards of stars broken in your eyes,
I hope you find it in you to look up;
Your wings are torn out, painted black,
But your eyes douse the flame burning in mine.
Your heart is cold and alone, frozen in ice,
No longer beating to this melody I sing;
My hands are shaking as I reach out to you,
Strewn along the horizon, a man so small.
Your chest rises and falls with every breath,
And breathing is all that you know now.
With the wind a light breeze on your beating temple,
Your spinning thoughts are slowing down, coming to a halt.
You open your bright blue eyes with arms open,
Waiting for someone to come and embrace you;
Whilst my spinning head is fading from rejection,
But yet there's a glimpse of hope left for you.
The thunder crashes to every beat of my broken heart,
That you hold in your hand, crystallizing in the sand.
And I scream in horror as I look down to you,
With tears in your eyes and words on your lips;
That's all you ever knew - those words of yours.
A sweet talker and a heartbreaker is what you are,
And baby, I must be a sucker for both;
So watch the sky and you might just see
Me in the glory of your morningstar.

-Jenna Elphick
June 5, 2007

[[Story would be about a girl that was in love with a guy who was in love with someone else and he never knew. She is looking "down" to him in the sense that she is now higher up in status than he is and she still has a little hope left in him to look to her in his morningstar and see she is meant for him, as the poem progresses he is slowly starting to see it for himself...very confusing, I know.]]

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is an excellent poem jenna, love the hidden story behind such beautiful word, you already know its a 5/5!!! flawless, keep them coming!!!!