Comments : Our Lives Are Now Changing

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    It indeed is truly difficult to detach oneself from your friends when one was too attached with them. I love the theme you presented on this work--simply enchanting. Reading this inspirational piece motivates me to look forward for my own bright future. =] Thank you.

    Nice work, nonetheless. 'twas my real joy to read it. I hope you all the best and take care! 5/5

    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by hani

    Hi
    very nice and beautiful good work keep it up 5/5 .
    and i'll appreciate your vote and comment for my poems
    hani

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    "Through tough loves and heartbreaks
    Through cries and upsets
    Our lives are now changing
    Completely reset"
    ^ My favorite lines.
    Beautifully written poem, it's really touching.
    Keep writing!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    THis is a great poem
    i loved it so much
    it was well written
    and it was very touching

    it s a very beautiful poem

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I must say this was quite the amazing piece. I found it to be heartfelt and capturing many people i'm sure can relate to this fine work. The concept behind this poem was really great. I really have enjoyed reading this piece. Well done a really good effort.~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Again, work on punctuation.

    I say that some words were forced, but this poem had better grammar...

    [voted 5]

    _Sam