I love this poem so much sisi. Its beautiful and passionate and wonderful!!! Absolutely LOVE the repitition in the second stanza its so perfect, and the rhyme and rhythm was outstanding!!! ITS SO BEAUTIFUL i just wanna read it over and over and over again. I LOVE YOU!!!!!! 5/5 MY DARLING!!

I liked this :] The title really drew me into it and made me want to read it even more. Your descriptions were great as was the emotion in it. One thing though, in the line:

"Iâ??m somewhere in the middle now, completely chained to what I feel."

^^ Take out the symbols in "I'm". The website does that to some words, but it would look neater if you edited them out.

5.5
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