Razor

by Kelsey   Jun 6, 2007


Razors here
Razors there
Razors lying every where
Blood falls down and open wrists
Tears fall down
Look at this
One dead body
another dead soul
Razors here
Razor there
Razor every where
All alone no where to go
wishing you where dead
pool of blood
pool of tear
now i'm dead
don't come near

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  • 17 years ago

    by dungeonbat

    Sad, short and gets right to the point. worthy of 5.0 all day long doomed till death dungeonbat

  • 17 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Good poem!!!!! 5/5 good rhythim (sp) as well keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Skyfire

    For some reason this write really hit me. I read it over again, and probably will re-read a few more times. I liked it, awesome job.

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The pain and sorrow is felt in every word that is read. May you one day find the peace and joy you seek deep within your heart young lady.

    sadaddy

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