The pain and sorrow is felt in every word that is read. May you one day find the peace and joy you seek deep within your heart young lady.

sadaddy

For some reason this write really hit me. I read it over again, and probably will re-read a few more times. I liked it, awesome job.

Good poem!!!!! 5/5 good rhythim (sp) as well keep up the good work

Sad, short and gets right to the point. worthy of 5.0 all day long doomed till death dungeonbat