by x Mo x Jun 6, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I stare into your eyes |
Oh my gosh, A couple stanzas of the poem make me shiver a little bit, I can see myself in the poem. And thats hard to do! Great job. |
by saphire
Great poem!!!! i can picture all of it hapenin |
by claire
Amazing poem - so sweet it makes my heart hurt! i love the end of the 1st stanza - when i like a guy (never anything like what this poem describes, but still pretty powerful) i always watch his mouth when hes not watching (i hope!) the whole thing was poetic yet simple - definitely 5/5! |