Amazing poem - so sweet it makes my heart hurt! i love the end of the 1st stanza - when i like a guy (never anything like what this poem describes, but still pretty powerful) i always watch his mouth when hes not watching (i hope!) the whole thing was poetic yet simple - definitely 5/5!

Great poem!!!! i can picture all of it hapenin

Oh my gosh, A couple stanzas of the poem make me shiver a little bit, I can see myself in the poem. And thats hard to do! Great job.