Swan Hill (acrostic)

by David   Jun 6, 2007


Suadara bermain
Wanita menikmati hidupnya
Anda berapa lama anda tinggal di Swan Hill?
Negeri saya sangat nyaman

Harapan dan mimpi di mana-mana
Iklim panas sekali dan,
Lowongan lapangan lumpur
Limbah untuk kecil.

(translation from Indonesian to English)

Children playing
Women enjoy their life
How long have you lived in Swan Hill?
My country very pleasant

Hopes and dreams are everywhere
Climate is very hot and,
Vacant fields of dirt
Waste at a minimal.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    David
    Awesome :) Very creative.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    I liked how it was in indonesian first and then you translated it 5/5 i learnt indonesian but I'm terrible at it... may i ask, are you from Swan Hill?

    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Aku suka your Swan Hill. Very beautiful and descriptive. You owe 5/5 from me for this lovely piece.

    In fact Aku suka kamu ;-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    Very creative, I learn Indonesian at school so it was easy to read...ish 5/5 Great choice of words and I went to Swan Hill in grade 2

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very cool
    its neat that you know a different language
    i wish i knew two
    or more i guess
    very good
    5/5
    love always
    kaila

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