Really really nice poem!!
so much hidden emotions......I wish everythg with u become as good as u r.

God bless u

This poem was great. I loved the style that you have written the structure truely great. This had emotion which was portrayed deep and into the depths of your heart which was really capturing. I found this to be a really interesting read. Well done with this beautiful piece of poetry. ~mel

Love definately and always will make your outlook on life a thousand times brighter, there really is no great feeling. I loved your poem and the words you used were perfect, it had a good flow and very strong emotion. Fantastic work 5/5

Hassan
Beautiful poem. You will always have feelings for your true love. Memories to keep in your heart.

slowly my heart will be filled
with happiness and one day this
world will seem awesome the
loveliness of life will shine on me

These lines are great.
Take Care Cindy

I liked it. The flow was very nice all through out this poem. The word choice was very niceand the format of the poem was great. I gave it a 5/5.

Good poem you capture the truth
one day you will find true love

A very heartfelt and beautiful poem. I can relate to it in my own way. You have your own way of writing, and I think I like it. A nice poem.

Tammie