Being Stubborn.

by MissAlyssaGraff   Jun 6, 2007


I asked if I could help,
I even said please.
She said she's okay,
but didn't sound at ease.

She thinks she's independent,
but really she's not.
She's just being stubborn,
and all day they faught.

It's okay to have some pride,
but you're going overboard.
Just let me step in and help,
for the sake of the Lord!

I think it's great that you're trying,
I'm so very proud.
And once you step aside,
I won't be so loud.

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  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Oh my stars and little fishes! That sounds exactly like something I once said to my sister! Of course I didnt say it so poetically, but the same idea! You sound so perfectly poetic, as if youve been doing this all your life! It's beautiful the way it flowed and the way the rhymes were free and not forced! WOW!

    ~N~