Comments : Love Me Or Let Me Go

  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    Hmm.........a good poem.

    Constantly telling me you love me
    So why do you do the things you do?
    Things between us used to be so blissful
    Now all my time is spent feeling blue

    Flinching everytime you're near me
    Scared to get to close
    You used to be so kind and gentle
    Now you attack me by force.

    beautifully written stanza.
    love you work.
    take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Beautifully written.. i like this one.
    i love how u worded it, 5/5
    xx