Comments : Nobody's Doll

  • 17 years ago

    by saphire

    Amazing amazing amazing, its so good to be you.:D

    Don't give a f u c k what you think
    For I'm happy being me

    "Used to think you might change
    But this friendship has taken it's toll
    It is about time you realized
    I'm not your f u c k i n g barbie doll!"

    my favorite lines

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Used to think you might change
    But this friendship has taken it's toll
    It is about time you realized
    I'm not your f u c k i n g barbie doll!

    That stanza was amazing truely emotional, the feelings of sadness/anger you portrayed were well written. This whole poem was really interesting definitly a 5/5 from me. I lost no interest what so ever reading this. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    You can label me a loser
    'Cause I do things my own way
    Your 'hurtful' words to me
    Are nothing but child's play

    loved that part. great write. keep it up