by Jenni Marie Jun 6, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Piercing stares and whispers |
by Melpomene
This poem was great, the flow amazing and your word choice was powerful holding strong emotions which flowed beautifully throughout this entire poem. Im sure so many people can relate to this poem in different ways. Well done on the structure. |
Excellent poem ,flow was great and the wording was wonderful, very painful poem ,sad and heartache filled it all the way through, i can relate to this very well, you have my blessing, great write , keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5 |