Excellent poem ,flow was great and the wording was wonderful, very painful poem ,sad and heartache filled it all the way through, i can relate to this very well, you have my blessing, great write , keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

This poem was great, the flow amazing and your word choice was powerful holding strong emotions which flowed beautifully throughout this entire poem. Im sure so many people can relate to this poem in different ways. Well done on the structure.

People are telling me stories
Saying I should tell you where to go
because every time you cheat on me
I'm always the last to know

That was my favorite stanza in this poem it was deep and heartfelt. Well done on a nicely penned poem which I enjoyed reading~mel