Theres only you you you.

by Sofie   Jun 6, 2007


(I've translated this poem from swedish, beacause it was in swedish i first wrote it.)

In me there's you.
You you you.
You'll always be in there, won't you?
I wish that i didn't miss you. Cause it cuts like a rusty knife. Deeper and deeper every day.
I wish that the thoughts of you wasn't in my head every time i shut my eyes.
Then all I see is you.
You you you.
And every heartbeat that you've made my broken heart beat. I wish that you felt. It's like getting a punch in the stomach every second. But from the inside. There you're lying and eating my guts. Inside and out.
It's as if my heart was wrapped in barbed wire.
Thousand thousand meters. This will never work.
I don't want to be broken. I want to be whole.
But first I've got to let go that I want you to make me whole.

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  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    This is a really nice poem...the message is really deep and it's full of emotion...
    the flow is a little off, though...
    probably for being a translation...
    i'd like to know swedish, to be able to read the original piece...i'm sure it's wonderful...
    but all i know is french, german, english and portuguese...(with portuguese i manage to get more or less spanish, but...)
    well, forgeting the languages...(i hope you're not getting bored...
    this was a really nice poem...
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*