So much reality placed in this poem. I love the Acrostic forms. The are more complicated then they appear.

This is just so wonderfully written and shows that you can accomplish many form of structured poetry with ease.

--Sher

I love this acrostic, it just really struck me. You can feel the emotion and pain as you read through it and the imagery is great. Acrostics are a hard style to write while leaving an impact on readers, but this one is very powerful and I`m sure it leaves an impact on the readers. Great job, Hunn.

5.5
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Heyyy!!! im back on this site!! OMG!!! u are better than EVER!!! ur poems is SOOOO full of feeling...its so deep...and so amazing!! jessy ur getting better and better at this!
luff ya
xxxooo
vika

Very good job on this one! :)

Wow i realy like it!!