by williamcampbell Jun 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Shes sitting on the floor crying, wishing for death but she isnt dying, wanting justice but getting none, what could she do but grab the gun. She pulls it out of the dresser drawer, its none other than a Colt 4 4. Now with a heart full of rage and hate, for this man it is too late, for shes about to seal his fate. |
Great poem! keep up the good work! |
by CrazyNlove
That was a really powerfull poem. i liked it a lot keep up the good work. well done. 5/5 |
by Baby Rainbow
Thats good and really powerful. i enjoyed readin it and think you have made an excellent job. i think it would maybe be better if it was layed out more btu only to make it easier to read, good poem well done x |