After meeting you

by Johnathan   Jun 6, 2007


Before meeting you,
The breath in my lungs was useless
If not concentrated in the right area of my body,
So were my emotions useless
If not concentrated on the right people in my life.

After I met you,
My life changed completely
For you took away my breath and scrambled my emotions!
I'm writing a poem by breathtaking
And emotion changing thoughts,
A poem of life after meeting you
The person who made me realize
That life isn't worth living
If you don't live it to your emotions content
And to the best your breath will allow.

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  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Thisi s a good poem...nice flow!
    it hows ur depth!:D
    keep writing
    never gice up
    tk care bree

  • 17 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    This is pretty good
    next poem try rhyming
    it adds soemthign to it
    but anyways this way relli good
    keep it up 5/5
    <3jess