Comments : Locked in time(child abuse)

  • 17 years ago

    by dawn green

    Aww, very sad. everytime i read these poems i feel so bad that you had to endure these things. but you made it thrugh it thank god and you are the sweet person that you are today!
    god bless

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Tracy
    This tears my heart. Parts of your story remind me of someone I know. A little boy who is very close to my heart. Thank God he is out of this situation now. Excellent write.

    Make it to school
    bus was running late
    no time for food
    just have to wait.

    This is so wrong the things that people can do to children.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    I think this sums up the whole situation.

    "Pain in my heart
    no child should feel"

    No child should ever feel this hurt, emotional or physical. I cant imagine anyone enduring this and getting through it. Your poems are so painfully truthful that it can be atorture to think of a child going through this. Its really hard to think of a small innocent child being treated this way it makes me so confused, mad and frustrated. (5/5)

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Very nice poem it was really good..i can relate 100% honestly..5/5