by Tracy D Rollings Jun 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Staring out the window |
by Chelsey
This is a good poem,I've gone through some things with my family..drinking, hitting etc. all the "good" stuff. And I know how painful it is even when it was so long ago..This is a very nice poem, two thumbs up! |
by Shar
My friend...you write so well. When I read it, I can feel your pain...wanting to take it away from you some how. Keep writing :) |
by Jenni Marie
This is so heartbreaking to read, and yet so beautifully written...the flow was good throughout, the imagery you portrayed wonderfully done, and the ending is hardhitting and intense. |
by Bonnie Rose
I dont quite no what to say. this is a beautifully sorrowful and hits the reader with such a serious problem. i think this combination is truly moving. |
by Fsams
Very nice poem and with a very valuable message. You have highlighted a very important issue. max rating from me |