I don't know what to say lol 5/5 |
by x Mo x
Sends chills down my spine...especially the last line, that one really stops my breathing. I love it, it's so dark yet so wonderful! |
Beautiful. |
Out of all of your poems I've read... this one's my favorite. Beautifully written acrostic there, it even rhymed. not alot of people could pull that off. Nicely done. |
by Bryan
Tis an excellent acrostic jane, short but great, i give it a 5/5!!! |
Very good. |
Well all that I have to say has already been said, Empress Jane, owner of our club. |
A perfect acrostic. You've captured the essence and meaning of fear wonderfully. Ever hear the song F.E.A.R. by Ian Brown- the lyrics are phenomenal. Excellent poem. |
by Spirit
One of your better ones. |