I really liked this poem, very inspirational. I can relate because i have been through different kinds of events and it always seems like no body else can help except for Jesus. It goes to show who cares the most :) Great poem!

Very inspirational for all of us that have walk through the dark valley and found divine mercy The poem is welll written

Wow! this poem is truely amazing...so many people can relate to it..and while reading it i felt the pain and i felt like crying because i've been through this kind of stuff and jesus was the only person left to turn to....

"Then I called on Jesus,
The only other name I knew.
I didn't know what to pray,
Neither could I find the words to say.
But He heard my silent prayer,
He understood the words that I did not utter."

that was a great stanza ....i loved it!

excellent job! 5/5

That was very sweet and heart felt m'dear, I loved it, Jesus is awsome like that eh? <3

Wow great poem very inspirational like he said 'then you call to jesus' a great idea with a great feelings nice poem 5/5

Gene Ross

Wow .. that was a really well written poem.. it was so inspiring! it had a very good message in this poem.
'"Then I called on Jesus,
The only other name I knew.
I didn't know what to pray,
Neither could I find the words to say.
But He heard my silent prayer,
He understood the words that I did not utter."'

^^ my fav stanza it to me; said that 'actions speack louder than words'

5/5
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It's very good that you write this kind of things - It can inspire people to believe to God.

Anyway flow was smooth, good vocab.
Just a suggestion.. To eliminate some of the I's =)

Keep up the good work!

Wow this is flawless. So true and a wonderful write. Sure your testimony and I owe 5/5 for this nice piece.

Great keep it up
Fsams

Again i give you a 5 because i don't want to down vote you. i am sorry

I turned to pills
For I was ready to die,
I thought that the solution to my problems was suicide.
So I popped open the pill concocter,
And took one pill after the other.
Am I going to hell? The thoughts went flying
I felt really weak in my knees, for I was slowly dying.
my fav stanza
a very inspiring piece. Deep and a masterpiece!!! 5/5

People should always call on Jesus!!Love it!

This was quite the beautiful piece, I myself am very religious so it's good to see someone elses faith in jesus. A very inspirational poem that I'm sure did give others hope in life. Well done on creating such an amazing piece of poetry. ~mel

This brought tears to my eyes, i have never in my life been moved to tears by a poem of such, it is beautiful and i love it well done

This brought tears to my eyes, i have never in my life been moved to tears by a poem of such, it is beautiful and i love it well done

I don't ever leave comments, but this is exactly my life story, I love it! you did a wonderful job on it!