Illicit Cupid

by Natalie84   Jun 6, 2007


Broken love dejection
Created callous eruption
Cries bellow out
She lost her safe haven

Woe is she, she weeps
Affairs gone wrong
Make her question
If she'll ever belong

Instead of trying again
She stalks the unknown
Reiterating pain she received
Upon her personal clones

This heartless new being
Full of hate and anguish
Strives only to wound
Hurting the fragile, now her fetish

Innocent souls damaged
Due to one broken heart
She is now the villain of love
Playing her first lover's part

She caresses their bodies
In fictitious admiration
As she creates her own
Chronicles of fiction

Men fall all over her
Her beauty unmatchable
One man wrecked her soul
Now she's the one, vulnerable

Falling in love with her victim
Was never part of the plan
After breaking one more heart
She lost the perfect man

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  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    This whole write is perfect from start to finish. It really holds the attention of the reader. Well done Nat, your writing gets stronger and more powerful with each new poem you post.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Falling in love with her victim
    Was never part of the plan
    After breaking one more heart
    She lost the perfect man
    ^^^^
    Nat I love this ending .... Especially the last 2 lines. A wonderfully penned write that had my full attention from beginning to end.

    Dang girl it has been awhile since we chatted ... Thank you for your comments, I was thinking to myself this name doesn't look familiar but the writing does .... then I realized IT'S NAT NAT .... lol
    Miss ya girly ...
    Have a wonderful weekend!

  • 17 years ago

    by unknown

    It's wonderful.. ^^
    Love your poem. Good choice of words.
    Good ending too... ^^
    Great work...
    Tell me if you submit a new one.. ^^
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I read your poem and found it quite an easy read and a pleasant piece. Keep up the good words. May the ebb and flow of your thoughts and emotions find a good spot to call home.

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    OMG THAT'S SO GOOD!
    5/5-Liz

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