OMG THAT'S SO GOOD!
5/5-Liz

I read your poem and found it quite an easy read and a pleasant piece. Keep up the good words. May the ebb and flow of your thoughts and emotions find a good spot to call home.

It's wonderful.. ^^
Love your poem. Good choice of words.
Good ending too... ^^
Great work...
Tell me if you submit a new one.. ^^
5/5

Falling in love with her victim
Was never part of the plan
After breaking one more heart
She lost the perfect man
^^^^
Nat I love this ending .... Especially the last 2 lines. A wonderfully penned write that had my full attention from beginning to end.

Dang girl it has been awhile since we chatted ... Thank you for your comments, I was thinking to myself this name doesn't look familiar but the writing does .... then I realized IT'S NAT NAT .... lol
Miss ya girly ...
Have a wonderful weekend!

This whole write is perfect from start to finish. It really holds the attention of the reader. Well done Nat, your writing gets stronger and more powerful with each new poem you post.