Sorry to hear that, but the world is a crazy place. And sometimes the people you need the most, aren't who you need them to be. Take care of yourself.

I feel really bad that your mother has done these terrible things in her life and has affected yours and your sisters in a negative way. Growing up without your mother must have been truly difficult but I know your a stronger person today for having to do so. Amazing poem 5/5

Deep heartfelt emtion, excellent word choice, the flow was amazing, and the message was clear. I am sorry that you having to go though all of this, my soul cries for your pain 5/5

Wow. This was a really great poem. I loved how you spoke through your emotions. I'm so sorry to hear about that. I hope it all turns out well. 5/5

I thought this poem was perfect. It does not matter what others think just yourself. If you get your thoughts and feelings down it is perfect in its own way.. Just remember that! anyway on to the poem..

Very good job! I thought you did wonderful on this.. Keep up the great work!

I liked the emotion you portrayed throughout this entire piece, I belived it to be honest and Powerful. Your word choice was quite simple yet effective and capturing. The message which was behind this poem was really beautifully sad. I found the flow to be on spot. You really did a good job on this. Well done creating such a sadly penned piece of poetry. Keep writing. ~mel

Very beautifully worded poem with strong overflow of mournful feelings. Its really well penned and you managed to pass out the message across. Great 5/5 piece

Very emotional and powerful. Sometime when the flow is raw... it makes the poem! That is what has happened here.

It is good to write a raw piece from the heart. I think those turn out better than a poem that has been reworked a zillion times and lost its meaning.

I am glad that you were able to get it out here. I know that the meth, cocain, and all the other drugs ruin many lives.

I do not really tell someone that I have not known that I am proud of them, but I am proud of you. Staying clean despite those around you is hard, and for a young individual it is even harder. Way to go kiddo! I give you many kuddos for that alone.

--Sher

A good write, strong message, watch out for the format though, it seems a bit off towards the end, but overall great job

your servant:
atticus