This poem has an awesome flow, and great metaphors. Also I sense a very deep meaning reaching past the heart and mind into the soul

I really liked the poem I thought the meaning was great and the flow and word choice as well. I think we all try and make the right choices and serve our hearts well. Excellent write 5/5

This was an interesting style, I found the shorter lines to be quite effective on this one actually. The flow a little off in some places no enough to shatter the poem though. Powerful wording none the less this was a good read~mel

Nice words and great style of writting!
poem introduces it self>>>>
great JOB
~HAZEL~