I like it its reallly good good job keep it up:)~melissaraye~

It was pretty interesting, the flow wasn't perfect, but the vocab and emotion were really strong and beautiful. you might just want to go over it to see if there was anything you could do... but it out of everything, it was a wonderful poem. so 4/5
gabriella

I liked the vocab you used in this poem. that set the mood of the poem. it was also easy to understand.

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This is great, yet so sad....
i really like ur style of writing and the flow was just so wonderful. as always you have done a great job and it was a great write. a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it.

That was very well written. I hope you placed in the contest 5/5

Has to be one of favorites by you. I loved the word choice, all for crimson, it is done too much and therefore as been dubbed "Cliche"
Try finding a synonym for the word crimson, one that hasn't been done to death. pardon the pun lol all in all good write, intresting, and enjoyable read, good luck!

I thought the flow and imagery were great in this poem, especially the imagery in the last stanza it was excellent. Great work as always 5/5 keep up the great work GG23

I think this poem was amazingly emotional 5/5 keep writing

~NinjaGirl~

B-E-A-U-tifully written...so much emotion, so much feeling...i could feel the pain int he poem,

you can tell if came from teh heart

Great work

If you get the chance r / r / c some of my poems..

~<3 Alwayz ~<3
~Shannon~

I thought the emotion could have been stronger in this poem. I could tell from the beginning you didn't write it just for yourself. It felt a little forced at times, but I'll give it a 4/5. good job.

Good - i'm not a big fan of freeform, but this is amazing - a lot of sorrow, and "drenched in pain".

Wonderful job... i hope you win this contest.. this poem had great emotion in it and the flow was MUCH better.. this was an enjoyable read keep it up :D

I thought it was very good, the emotion was awesome, and the flow was good. I couldnt see anything wrong with it
I'll give you a 5/5 for this.
Love Tara-Kay

As scarlet blood pooled
[[Get your a-s-s away from cliche. I KNOW you've got better lines then that.]]

Otherwise.
It wasn't too bad.
I liked the short lines, but I read it straight through; very fast because there were no punctuation marks to slow me down or make me pause.
Consider putting some in; they'll really enhance your meaning.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

By Far, the best one I have read by you.
It just seemed so natural. The flow was flawless and it read from the heart.
Excellent doesn't begin to describe how i think of this poem...

xPaula.