Comments : Goodbye.

  • 17 years ago

    by Anea

    Its cool :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    Thats so sad you new of things such as this at such a young age, great poem darling your words spoke the innocence of a child, take care xox lithium

  • 17 years ago

    by reborn

    What???? ok ok as I was reading it i was like yeah this is good but then i read u wrote this when u were 11??!!!! r u some kind of genius or smth? haha no seriously that is 10/5 for a 11 yr old! the only part that worries me is the despair i see in that 11 yr old.. seems a bit early to be thinking like that. pls don't be depressive like that at such an early stage of ur life!! life is a long ride and there are ups and downs. the ups will make up for all ur previous downs believe me! so keep ur head up n keep faith in better things to come ok? take care now. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xXVampiraXx

    Really? 11?
    D*** thats really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by mary oneson

    This is so sad.
    keep smiling babygirl.