My Perfect Dream

by EssenceOfLace   Jun 6, 2007


Drink Away The Pain,
Cut Away The Sorrow.
Think About The Past,
And The Forecast Of Tomorrow.

He Was Everything To Me,
All I Wanted In Life.
But He Left Me All Alone,
With Nothing But To Cry.

My Tears Are All I Have Now,
And My Mind Of Memories.
My Hopeless Lonesome Self,
At Loss Of A Perfect Dream.

I Keep Thinking It's My Fault,
Maybe I Wasn't Good Enough.
Even Though I Gave Him My All,
He Didn't Want To Be In Love.

I Can Keep Making Up Excuses,
But None Of Them Will Matter.
I Still Lost Him Anyways,
He Is Gone Forever.

Now All There's Left To Do,
Is Sit And Think Of What Could've Been.
Close My Eyes And Fall Asleep,
And Fall Into My Perfect Dream...
.........Him.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hopelessly Devoted to You

    EXCELLENT, THE FLOW AND EVERYTHING! i was BLOWN away!

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    When i opend your this poem i thought that would be love poem but this is love poem with sad feelings..

    in our lives we give them aall to whowe love but they left us alone.... they are just blind to find true love..... they cannot makes the diffrence between ture love and artificail love..

    we love them and we give them our all andthe hate us and leave us forever...

    its such a sad thing. and its such a great sorrows of life. that we cannot forget..

    this pain stays with us till the rest of our lives. and they forget atthe next moment to who we love..... they could be so selfsih we knew maybe but we love them.. cuz we accpet them for whteeverthey are. and this is the love...

    your poems made me think about the girl to who i love.. but she never accpeted meand gone..... andlook istill loveher three years spend but i still love. her... how strange..
    your this poem is great poem.
    i respect your every words. in this poem.... soperfect innocent caring sad sorrows grives.. pains everything i found in your poem....

    this is my favourite stanza

    I Keep Thinking It's My Fault,
    Maybe I Wasn't Good Enough.
    Even Though I Gave Him My All,
    He Didn't Want To Be In Love.

    i really loved that stanza..... totaly this poem relates to my story..

    great work you got 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Ouch. I know exactly how it feels losing a perfect dream. Its devastating and heartbreaking. I was truly in a dark place after my dream ended but recently I have come out of it. What I learned is that my high hopes and expectations got in the way and I regret a lot of what happened but we learn from our mistakes. Well done with this .. you really took me back. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Awesome poem. This is very well-written! The flow was good, the word choice was decent, and the concept was brilliant. Great write! 5/5

    (The ending was amazing)

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Another great one. the ending was particularly powerful. I was nearly crying at the stanza:
    "He Was Everything To Me,
    All I Wanted In Life.
    But He Left Me All Alone,
    With Nothing But To Cry."

    I like how you capitalized every word. It's different, but I like it. Rhyming scheme, word choice and flow were great. Everything was great. Made me think about the person I have lost, or am close to losing, I guess. Well, I hope if this did happen to you, you are doing ok, and he is not. [:

    Good job! 5/5

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