Thanx for ur comment...
I really like this poem...keep it up!

This poem is exactly how I feel and what I'm going through. Like, really, it describes me so perfectly, it's scary! lol. yeah, boys are stupid. but we all fall for them anyways. why, no one knows ey? lol. :] well. great poem. 5/5.

This is a good poem. i know exactly how you feel or something close. my ex was my everything we talked about the future and the past and i would give up anything for him. yet somehow it wasn't enough. im trying to learn how to not blame myself for something that was inevitable. Good luck to you as well

I almost went through this, but lucky I've stopped myself. This poem is really show true fact abt them boys. Girls, we just love being sensitive until we fall, we love to break their jaw.

I almost went through this, but lucky I've stopped myself. This poem is really show true fact abt them boys. Girls, we just love being sensitive until we fall, we love to break their jaw. Greattt POEM!!!

""another good poem of yours another one filled with emotion..wonderful work!!...=)

OMG! i so know how you feel right! Like you just took the words right out of my mouth!! ...isnt it painful to lose something you gave your all to. uh, just painful! >.<

good job though! i couldnt have wrote it anymore better!

keep it up -n- take care!!

Wow i rele liike this one!!! keep up the good work!!! 5/5

<3 i love you silly

Wow this poem is.. beautiful. the words are all so true. it shows your emotion. great job

This is like the second time today that someone poem reminded me of staind's
song everything changes check out the lyrics
5/5 on this awesome poem

AMAZING!!! i didn't think the 'of him' was necessary but lol don't listen to me, i just didn't think it fitted properly. great poem!!

I loved the ending it fit so perfectly! great poem it has good flow and its got emotion. keep it up :)

OMG! i cried! curse u! lol that was the most heart felt lost love poem ive ever read! 5/5

Souns like he meant alot to you. its a good poem tho, good imagry, and strong emotion. well done

I liked the whole message of the poem, but I think you have more talent then you put into this one. You couldve flowed the words much better, but i'm not saying the meaning was drowned.

4/5

You know whathon, if he left you then it's not love and if he didn't stay..it ws never meant to be. I know you hear that a lot but i've been with the same guy for almost 2 years and that is best advice about love anyone could eve give you. Follow your heartand keep writing these lovely poems. Thank you for the comment on mine. I will be sure to add you to my favorites.
5/5
<3Tay
have a nice night :)

Beautiful... and so sad, it brought tears to my eyes! I could never imagine that feeling... I can't imagine it, dont want to. I love your style and I love all your poetry! You have so much talent!

It is very heart-felt and emotional

nice work :)

probably if you don't write every word with capital letter it'd be easier to read, but it doesn't really matter

and yeah the ending is perfect

This poem is just great, this is my favorite part:

Drink Away The Pain,
Cut Away The Sorrow.
Think About The Past,
And The Forecast Of Tomorrow.

I just love the way it all flows together, great poem! Once again, I can really relate to it! Nice work! =)

Another great one. the ending was particularly powerful. I was nearly crying at the stanza:
"He Was Everything To Me,
All I Wanted In Life.
But He Left Me All Alone,
With Nothing But To Cry."

I like how you capitalized every word. It's different, but I like it. Rhyming scheme, word choice and flow were great. Everything was great. Made me think about the person I have lost, or am close to losing, I guess. Well, I hope if this did happen to you, you are doing ok, and he is not. [:

Good job! 5/5