Awesome poem. This is very well-written! The flow was good, the word choice was decent, and the concept was brilliant. Great write! 5/5

(The ending was amazing)

Ouch. I know exactly how it feels losing a perfect dream. Its devastating and heartbreaking. I was truly in a dark place after my dream ended but recently I have come out of it. What I learned is that my high hopes and expectations got in the way and I regret a lot of what happened but we learn from our mistakes. Well done with this .. you really took me back. *5/5*

When i opend your this poem i thought that would be love poem but this is love poem with sad feelings..

in our lives we give them aall to whowe love but they left us alone.... they are just blind to find true love..... they cannot makes the diffrence between ture love and artificail love..

we love them and we give them our all andthe hate us and leave us forever...

its such a sad thing. and its such a great sorrows of life. that we cannot forget..

this pain stays with us till the rest of our lives. and they forget atthe next moment to who we love..... they could be so selfsih we knew maybe but we love them.. cuz we accpet them for whteeverthey are. and this is the love...

your poems made me think about the girl to who i love.. but she never accpeted meand gone..... andlook istill loveher three years spend but i still love. her... how strange..
your this poem is great poem.
i respect your every words. in this poem.... soperfect innocent caring sad sorrows grives.. pains everything i found in your poem....

this is my favourite stanza

I Keep Thinking It's My Fault,
Maybe I Wasn't Good Enough.
Even Though I Gave Him My All,
He Didn't Want To Be In Love.

i really loved that stanza..... totaly this poem relates to my story..

great work you got 5

EXCELLENT, THE FLOW AND EVERYTHING! i was BLOWN away!