Daddy Where'd You Go?,,

by JodiieBaybeh   Jun 6, 2007


Mummy where has Daddy gone?
Will he be here for tea?
He said that if i was really good,
He'd read me a bedtime story.

''Come on you, lets get you to bed.''
You said as it turned eight o'clock
I ran upstairs and jumped in bed.
Awaiting for his knock.

My bedroom door began to open
As i sat holding my bear,
daddy's not coming honey,''
daddy just does not care!''

As Mummy left the room
i snuggled down to go sleep
holding my teddy so tightly
Another promise you did not keep

Dad if you can hear me..
Why did you have to go?
You left that night,
Now you, ill never know

I am seventeen years old now,
And cant even picture your face,
You didn't even say goodbye
Just vanished without a trace...

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  • 16 years ago

    by MizzCici

    WOW....I can really relate to thismade me wonna cry..My dad never cared never has u did a great job...keep writtin and stop by sumtime and comment!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    A well written poem hun, but very sad......

  • YOUR POEM BRINGS TEARS TO MY EYES. MY DAD LEFT ME AND I HAVE FELT LIKE I DONT EVEN KNOW WHO HE IS ANYMORE. I WAITED FOR HIM ONE NIGHT AND HE JUST NEVER SHOWED. I HAD SUPER AND ALL WAITING BUT HE DIDNT COME HOME. I LOVE YOUR POEM AND I AM MARKING IT AS ONE OF MY FAVORITES.

  • 17 years ago

    by kia

    Thats horrible. Really full of emotion, very well written xo

  • Dat is a brillant poem really really great