Aww, thats really sad. i think the poem expresses a lot of hurt and a very big part of your life. its very well written. well done xxx

Thats so good. Really sad and full of emotion. a def 5/5
loved it, sounded so sweet and innocent at the beginin and more mature at the end.
ps. hey i can now read your poems so far they're all great - tho cant comment on the love ones... summet up wiv my internet

Dat is a brillant poem really really great

Thats horrible. Really full of emotion, very well written xo

YOUR POEM BRINGS TEARS TO MY EYES. MY DAD LEFT ME AND I HAVE FELT LIKE I DONT EVEN KNOW WHO HE IS ANYMORE. I WAITED FOR HIM ONE NIGHT AND HE JUST NEVER SHOWED. I HAD SUPER AND ALL WAITING BUT HE DIDNT COME HOME. I LOVE YOUR POEM AND I AM MARKING IT AS ONE OF MY FAVORITES.

A well written poem hun, but very sad......

WOW....I can really relate to thismade me wonna cry..My dad never cared never has u did a great job...keep writtin and stop by sumtime and comment!