I love this poem. I've added u to my fav authors! Keep writing PLZ!! |
by shadow
Short and sweet! |
by nicole
Good work cy =] |
by winterseve28
I thought you were talking about the drugs in the first 2 stanzas, but then I was surprised. Glad to read a poem from you. As always, well written and unfortunately full of hurt. Hope you are well and sobriety is getting easier. Missed you:) |
by Fan Angeleo
A good example of hurt and pain. |
by nicole
I really like this one |
Hey i just wanted to say that i love all your peoms they hit home with me. i was a coke addict for a good 3 years. most of my poems are based on my rough patches with coke. and the ups and down. i just wanted to thank you for your writing. reading your peoms kept my mind off of coke and your peoms put me in the mood to write so i would write more instead of doing coke. i have never met you only ever commented back and forth. but you have help me so much with your writing. i have been sober from coke for 3 months now <3 lots of love and endless thanks |
by CY GINDLE
Thanks u have no ideal how good ur comment means to me I KEEP hopeing |
by nicole
I finally read it. ilike it alot! |
by neo
I love this |
by AinsleySara
Hey This poem is awesome. Its shows me that all around us is where are demons are Not made up things or like you said "Don't Seep Through The floor" This poem has made me think about who my demons might be really liked it keep up wthe good work loved it! |
by CWG
Very Blunt I really like it! Another 5/5 from me. |
by Morticia
Wow. Amazing. And so true. 5! |
by Zach
Excellent rhyming, this poem is smooth, fluent and captivating at the same time. |
Freakin great poem. wow. i liked this one alot!! this is the total truth. great poem. 5/5 keep writing! |
by Steph
Wow... completely true! every word! |
by Jaimee
Absolutely amazing. =] |
Wow...I really loved this poem, honest and personal, it was like I could feel the emotions you wrote this one with. I always love when I can feel them :) This one is very true, the worst demons are the ones that we let walk right through our front doors. Great job |
Wow this was a very emotional piece. it was so powerful and just really showed the truth of how no one is ever what they seem and the people we usually care about are the people who land up hurting us and wishing we were dead because being dead seems like the best thing to be. i loved this piece, it really made me think about someone i know. great job, i loved it!!!! take care, 5/5 |
This was awesome. I got the meaning if it. This was great. 5/5 loved it! |