I really liked it. It was full of emotion. The flow was good and the word choice was great. I gave it a 5/5.

Beautiful poem..it was filled with emotions which was penned well...very touching peice...
The choice of words was good too..
Great write!

5/5
Kp it up!

xxPoojaxx

Awh, this was really sad but really good hunny. The flow worked really well and this is quite an accomplishment, since most people on this site cannot for the life of them write a poem with decent flow without a rhyme scheme. The descritpions worked well and your emotion was really clear and strong. Nice job. 5/5

I can relate to this SO much
you are so strong and brave and really talented, too.
I wish you all the best with everything you and your family do.
Geo
ps. i gave this 5 =]