It was a cool poem. The flow was very good. I really liked the rhyming. The word choice as always was great. I also liked the format you used for the last two stanzas. That was cool. I gave it a 5/5.

Wow! this is amazing! i love how you got it all to rhyme without any of them sounding forced. the flow was amazingly perfect. the only part that seemed a little off to me was the lines about your hands shaking because of the drugs... they ruin the flow, but only for that short while, everything else is perfecto!
great job!
5/5

Another excellent one! 5/5
RavEy!

Wow! amazing poem! has alot of feeling put into it. i really liked it! keep it up. 5/5

`-jackie.