I love this poem. It's written so beautifully, flows very well together. I loved the story it told. Very sweet. 5/5

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One of the best poems I've ever read. Keep up the awsome work 5/5

Very nice. Keep up the good work!!!

Hey, thanks for the comment. i LOVE this title. btw. but uhh yeah the poem doesnt have a definate rhym sceme.. like your rymes are 1,2,1,2 and then 1,2-- and it doesnt flow right like that.. and uhm some of the rhymes seemed forced just try to let it flow dont push it to make the ryhm.. uhm but your ending is really strong i really liked it.. keep it up you have tallent you just need to.. organize it! :D

Wow this one is very pretty.
5/5 :)

Awesome. Sometimes only you know best. Life is what you make it.

This is really good. Let me get this straight you are 13?

Bery nice.. Some stanzas contained very strong words and phrases... nice depth and emotion and pretty good rhyming...
One thing I found a bit dragy was the cooper iron an steel part...
But you did suceed in draging me back into the poem so there is no significant flaw really...

There's only one thing I can say; GORGEOUS!!!

Wow that was a truly beautiful poem
That was so sweet, it brought tears to my eyes
An amazing job