11th stanza
every thing's= everything's

Another great poem. The flow was nice. The word choice I thought was just ok. I didn't really like how the first sentence of each stanza was the same. But I still gave it a 5/5.

I like how you repeated 'im too high for this'
this is still 5 material, but it isn't as good as others you've written.
the rhymes were just ok, and the flow was just a bit jumpy, but overall it's very good.
i like the end, it kinda made me laugh. if it wasn't meant to make me laugh then... sorry.
5/5

All my life I was told pain isn't real
That was random.

All the things that I did miss
You should change that
It doesn't flow right

Over secrets I am forced to keep
Random again

All in all?
I effing love it.
Most of my friends smoke.
And you sum up their feelings really well.

Your ending?
Perfect.
Roll me another joint :P
5.5, dear

It's funny in a sad sort of way. I know people who live their lives too high to live. I really liked it. 5/5

I love your work your a very talented writter