by Vanessa Jun 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The pain had long since turned to pleasure |
by ALEX
Hmm.. be careful with the spell-check and whatnot. Very emotional poem, obviously. I liked it. =] Good job!! |
I thought this was very good.. Another great one from you!! Please keep up the awesome work.. 5/5 |
by Jackie Marie
Wow.. I don't know what else to say about it. This is very good. 5/5! Everything flowed together so well. Everything perfectly rhymed. I love it hun. It really brought a tear to my eye. Excellent job. =] |
by xo kisses xo
Wow! thats was so beautiful yet so sad. you did a wonderful job. i love this. i would give it a 10 if i could! 5/5 |
Wow. Once again! Amazing poem. Your a very good writer. Good choice in words and great rhyming. Keep it up!! 5/5 |